Senryu -Philosophical Poem by M. Asim Nehal

Senryu -Philosophical

Rating: 5.0

you opened my heart
with the key of lovely soul
to trap me inside

Wednesday, September 23, 2020
Topic(s) of this poem: philosophical
Aarzoo Mehek 23 September 2020

Happily trapped. Rejoice the good times. Nice senryu.5*

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Pallab Chaudhury 23 September 2020

Trap of love is set On this earth.Nobody knows When one will be caught... - RNT. A nice one...Thank you or sharing with us.

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Suzon Albert 23 September 2020

Wow so well thought out.

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Darren Jkoeryo 23 September 2020

Like a mouse trap, the like works as a web cow. Fantastic

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Juhaina Tumlu 23 September 2020

Fabulous senryu. short and meaningful.

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Anjandev Roy 23 September 2020

to trap me inside......wonderful write.....thank u, dear poet.....anjandev roy.

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Kostas Lagos 23 September 2020

Heart can be a trap.Excellent senryu! (By the way I will get my mug back!)

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