you opened my heart
with the key of lovely soul
to trap me inside
Trap of love is set On this earth.Nobody knows When one will be caught... - RNT. A nice one...Thank you or sharing with us.
Wow so well thought out.
Like a mouse trap, the like works as a web cow. Fantastic
Fabulous senryu. short and meaningful.
to trap me inside......wonderful write.....thank u, dear poet.....anjandev roy.
Heart can be a trap.Excellent senryu! (By the way I will get my mug back!)
Happily trapped. Rejoice the good times. Nice senryu.5*