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Senryu~ Storm Comments

Rating: ★5.0

among mount of sands
a single grain in your eyes
brings a teary storm
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M. Asim Nehal
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Bharati Nayak 25 July 2022

Amazing Senryu!

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Susan Williams 23 July 2022

M Asim ---yes, sometimes the tiniest pinpricks sting the most ---very 5-star deserving

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LeeAnn Azzopardi 18 July 2022

Wonderful senryu

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 18 July 2022

Magnificent Senryu adorned with superb imagery.So brilliantly crafted. To my Poem List.

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Nabakishore Dash 17 July 2022

Excellent senryu with stark truth Dr. Behalf.

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Gordon Walter 17 July 2022

Class Senryu, this is what relationship means.

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Nosheen Irfan 16 July 2022

Sterling ink! You are great at this form of writing.

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Poetic Sky 16 July 2022

Yes a grain can bring a big storm, Profound.

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M. Asim Nehal

M. Asim Nehal

Nagpur
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