Loke Kok yee

Senryu-The Drunk - Poem by Loke Kok yee

Staggering swaying
Floor table chairs all moving
Weekend pub crawling

Topic(s) of this poem: life

Form: Senryu

Comments about Senryu-The Drunk by Loke Kok yee

  • Valsa George (11/3/2015 4:23:00 AM)

    Great senryu! You have expressed the exact feeling in the exact way! (Report) Reply

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  • Melvina Germain (11/2/2015 7:58:00 AM)

    Fantastic imagery, so true, the best comedian drunk was Foster Brooks, I loved watching him portray a drunk and your lovely Senryu reminded me of him..... (Report) Reply

  • Kelly Kurt (10/31/2015 2:53:00 PM)

    I've been there. : -) (Report) Reply

    (11/1/2015 12:37:00 AM)

    So have I, many times! ! !

  • Sanjukta Nag (10/31/2015 9:49:00 AM)

    Satire for a drunken mind. very nice. (Report) Reply

  • Kumarmani Mahakul (10/31/2015 9:10:00 AM)

    Well envisioned with amusing collocation. Enjoyed with photo provided. Thanks. (Report) Reply

  • Mohammed Asim Nehal (10/31/2015 8:15:00 AM)

    Wow so well thought perfectly suits the picture...Liked it Sir. (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Saturday, October 31, 2015

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