Senryu-The Drunk

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Staggering swaying
Floor table chairs all moving
Weekend pub crawling

Loke Kok yee

Saturday, October 31, 2015

Topic(s) of this poem: life

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M Asim Nehal 31 October 2015

Wow so well thought perfectly suits the picture...Liked it Sir.

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Valsa George 03 November 2015

Great senryu! You have expressed the exact feeling in the exact way!

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Melvina Germain 02 November 2015

Fantastic imagery, so true, the best comedian drunk was Foster Brooks, I loved watching him portray a drunk and your lovely Senryu reminded me of him.....

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Kelly Kurt 31 October 2015

I've been there. : -)

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Loke Kok Yee 01 November 2015

So have I, many times! ! !

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Sanjukta Nag 31 October 2015

Satire for a drunken mind. very nice.

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Kumarmani Mahakul 31 October 2015

Well envisioned with amusing collocation. Enjoyed with photo provided. Thanks.

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