Friday, October 13, 2017

Senryu: The Nature Calls Comments

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To make the mind free,
Come and lie with me, under-
The green wood tree!
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Pallab Chaudhury
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Ravi Kopra 30 June 2020

preshaan kyon hotay ho aao so jaao mere saath haray peD k neechay

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Pallab Chaudhury 10 August 2020

Thank you so much for the comments... Stay safe pc

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Shafeeq C P 15 April 2019

" Nature provides for everyone's need but cannot provide for anyone's greed', said M K Gandhi

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Pallab Chaudhury 16 April 2019

Thank you for the comments. Stay blessed. pc

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Jagdish Singh Ramána 10 January 2019

we go to nature to find peace nature dresses the dress of solitude not the clamour. nice poem.

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Pallab Chaudhury 19 February 2019

Thank you for the insightful comments... Stay blessed, PC

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A very good haiku. Demands our attention/consideration for nature and it's beauty

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Pallab Chaudhury 24 December 2018

Thank you for the observation made... With best wishes, PC

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Dr Antony Theodore 21 August 2018

lie with me please under this green tree and enjoy, peace, joy, shade, comfort and keep your mind cam. fill your mind with wonderful thoughts in the presence of nature....... very nice poem.. thank u dear poet. tony

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Pallab Chaudhury 25 August 2018

Thank you Dr. for your lovely words. With regards.

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Akhtar Jawad 05 July 2018

Respond to the calls of nature and the world wiil appear beautiful and nice.

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Pallab Chaudhury 06 July 2018

Thank you for the kind words. With regards.

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Binayakumar Mohanty 07 November 2017

Nice ambiguity poetic depiction.I loved it sir.

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Pallab Chaudhury 08 November 2017

Welcome! Thank you for visiting the e-page... With best wishes.

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Muzahidul Reza 14 October 2017

To make the mind free, Come and lie with me, under- The green wood tree! excellently depicted nature loving poem, thanks for sharing

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Pallab Chaudhury 15 October 2017

Thanking you for the encouraging words. With best wishes.

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Dr Dillip K Swain 13 October 2017

What a fabulous Haiku..! I loved it..Thanks for sharing

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Pallab Chaudhury 14 October 2017

Thank you for your comment. With best wishes.

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