deep below the clouds
hangs like some silken wishes
far from dreamy eyes
Beautiful picture you exhibit, a clear thoughts in this imagery and words that painted it here was really amazing! provoking....our dreams are always unseen by many but once it be real, then only it be like rain, felt by everybody!
Far from dreamy eyes! But, hope still lies ahead. Thanks for sharing this poem with us.
Nice poem full of mysticism. It relates to a man's spiritual probe. Thanks for sharing, Asim ji.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
Stunning imagery! A poetic delight!