Senryu Winters Chill Poem by Heather Burns

Senryu Winters Chill

Rating: 5.0


Winter arriving
I can feel the winters freeze
arctic air blowing.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Dave Walker 02 October 2013

We've had a lot of rain and wind today here in Leeds England today, so we could be in for a bad winter over here, a great poem.

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Aftab Alam Khursheed 02 October 2013

Dave clarified here also knocking nice

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Ken E Hall 13 October 2013

Not for us its boiling spring bring on winter wish we had snow but just for a day, thanks for the chill Heather! ...regards

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Sally Plumb Plumb 07 October 2013

Yes, indeed. Try Wind and Rain You might enjoy it.

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Valsa George 03 October 2013

The onset of winter is announced by chilly blasts. Nice write! ! Enjoyed!

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Patricia Grantham 03 October 2013

Lets get ready for the big chill. Pull out the big blankets and heavy quilts. Winters a coming! Nice Heather.

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Tribhawan Kaul 03 October 2013

True....lovely senryu from your pen.

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