Senryus - A Collection Poem by Sandra Martyres

Senryus - A Collection

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Another Village burns
Terrorists on the rampage
Who will capture them?

A sudden buzzing sound
A large bee-hive looms ahead
Honey is at hand.

Walking in the park
Approached by a young trickster
Wallet disappears

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Kesav Easwaran 07 July 2009

a senryu by defenition is a haiku-like poem of up to 17 syllables usually humorous or satirical. now you can see except the last one the other two- sensible lines though- do not qualify as senryus...however 10 for your sincere attempt Sandra

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Catrina Heart 05 July 2009

awesome senryu in current events.......10+++

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Indira Renganathan 05 July 2009

Three degrees of misery....well portrayed

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Priyanka Bhowmick 05 July 2009

u r too good in writing them cool senryu's... enjoyed reading

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