I can see when my eyes are open
I can feel when I reach out and touch
I can hear when my ears are willing
but my heart can only heal so much
i get the image of someone deep in 'the dumps', poor fella. : ( bri ;) p.s. signing in here still iffy. but i've noted several improvements in several areas of PH over past months recently. bri : )
I can feel a heavy heart behind this beautifully executed poem.
Beautiful rhythm and repetition that gives resonance to this melancholy piece and that last line was an excellent and heartbreaking closure, In other words, you have just written a perfect poem, my friend! Top marks and to my favorites
A well executed poem....
Truly pretty and impressive.....5 stars *****
All senses ultimately boil down to heart in the end.
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