Some lover's jealousies are such a tight squeezing embrace<br>
that the loved one can't help feeling<br>
coiled and embroiled<br>
like in the grip of a loving beast or literally a bear's hug<br>
And which makes her regret<br>
why God ever chose to model her into a beauty.<br>
For the perfection of her face and figure<br>
highlights to him his imperfections<br>
such that her illustrious famed beauty<br>
transforms him into a suspicious tamed beast! <br>
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A possessive kind of guy miner tis he<br>
who jealously guards<br>
this beauty secret<br>
like upon having struck gold<br>
and wishes to lock her up from the world
like a real-life Rapunzel's witch<br>
But as no black clouds can hide the radiant sun<br>
her world soon comes to know<br>
of her immaculate screened charms and beauty<br>
despite his protests and measures.<br>
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Yet in a world of unscruplous looters<br>
this louvred love cage turns out to be that blessing in disguise<br>
She can no longer be preyed upon by any predator guys.<br>
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Thus both lucky and unfortunate is the beautiful woman<br>
But let her bloom and breathe<br>
in love's cell or its engulfing dungeon<br>
for a free bird she was never meant to be for long<br>
And let her lover be her love's protective warden<br>
so no body but he is lured by her look and lovesong! <br>
She can't just forever fly and sing foot-loose and fancy-free<br>
A plethora of cocks out there might try to charm her<br>
with their new feathers<br>
serenading her with new love songs in the wind, <br>
All she must do is<br>
snap out from<br>
and slip away from<br>
their flirty fantasy.<
jealousy is a natural phenomenon when love is getting its highest peak. for every right moment negative feeling leads to its perfection.
Hey valsa yor coment realy scared me. I fear my man cud b my assassin in his dark love! ! But i cant escape frm his clutches ah! : O
Nice like how it was easy going and described both being protected but also caged Also like the relationships to stories and animals :)
I seem to see some rather hidden meanings in this poem that I will not address for fear of failure. Overall it is quite heavy-hitting & I agree, on the surface, that which you put so bluntly.
Detailed and creative portrait of jelousy unfolded from a pure focussed and rare talents that we have. nice...Mr Zanub really liked.
jealousy can be very hurtful there is no need for it if two people are truly in love
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
Jealousy in a lover can prove very dangerous in the long run though initially it may save you as a protective armour from the advances of other predators! But beware, the sentinel can turn to be your assassin! Great write! !