Sentinel Of Love Poem by s.zaynab kamoonpury

Sentinel Of Love

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Some lover's jealousies are such a tight squeezing embrace<br>
that the loved one can't help feeling<br>
coiled and embroiled<br>
like in the grip of a loving beast or literally a bear's hug<br>
And which makes her regret<br>
why God ever chose to model her into a beauty.<br>
For the perfection of her face and figure<br>
highlights to him his imperfections<br>
such that her illustrious famed beauty<br>
transforms him into a suspicious tamed beast! <br>
<br>
A possessive kind of guy miner tis he<br>
who jealously guards<br>
this beauty secret<br>
like upon having struck gold<br>
and wishes to lock her up from the world
like a real-life Rapunzel's witch<br>

But as no black clouds can hide the radiant sun<br>
her world soon comes to know<br>
of her immaculate screened charms and beauty<br>
despite his protests and measures.<br>
<br>
Yet in a world of unscruplous looters<br>
this louvred love cage turns out to be that blessing in disguise<br>
She can no longer be preyed upon by any predator guys.<br>
<br>
Thus both lucky and unfortunate is the beautiful woman<br>
But let her bloom and breathe<br>
in love's cell or its engulfing dungeon<br>
for a free bird she was never meant to be for long<br>
And let her lover be her love's protective warden<br>
so no body but he is lured by her look and lovesong! <br>
She can't just forever fly and sing foot-loose and fancy-free<br>
A plethora of cocks out there might try to charm her<br>
with their new feathers<br>
serenading her with new love songs in the wind, <br>
All she must do is<br>
snap out from<br>
and slip away from<br>
their flirty fantasy.<

POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
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COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Valsa George 13 November 2013

Jealousy in a lover can prove very dangerous in the long run though initially it may save you as a protective armour from the advances of other predators! But beware, the sentinel can turn to be your assassin! Great write! !

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Mohammed Albalushi 11 November 2013

jealously in love is good if its transfear the emotions but should be normal not over then it come very bad well write dear

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Ragia Sayed 08 November 2013

Great poem, , It took me to a fantasy world..

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Muhammad Ali 05 December 2013

dear, wish u a happy life and what is more imp the life afterlife. all kind of happenings are there in our life and on this earth. angels or demons, on each side, there is human to play the role. what we should atleast do that atleast we should not be the demon. wish you peace dear sis. regards.

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Muhammad Ali 05 December 2013

dear, wish u a happy life and what is more imp the life afterlife. all kind of happenings are there in our life and on this earth. angels or demons, on each side, there is human to play the role. what we should atleast do that atleast we should not be the demon. wish you peace dear sis. regards.

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S.zaynab Kamoonpuri 16 December 2014

Hey im a lady poetess not a mr.

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Melikhaya Zagagana 16 December 2014

Detailed and creative portrait of jelousy unfolded from a pure focussed and rare talents that we have. nice...Mr Zanub really liked.

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Anil Kumar Panda 28 December 2013

thats a nice ink.beautiful concept.keep inking.

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Misnia Bahri Awaludin 23 December 2013

very true said lovely poetry

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Heather Wilkins 09 December 2013

jealousy can be very hurtful there is no need for it if two people are truly in love

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