Separation Time Poem by michael Smajda

Separation Time

Rating: 5.0


'I'm leaving you now, '
Said the leaf to the branch.
'Have a safe journey, '
Replied the branch to the leaf.
As the leaf fluttered off
To only God knows where,
Naked branch prepares
For winter's coming grief.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Nosheen Irfan 02 December 2022

Great metaphorical write. Separation is painful but inevitable.

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Marvellous piece of poetry. Great images. Top score. Onto MyFavourites

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Kevin Patrick 01 December 2022

Winter leaves all things bare. A great evocative look at winter. Imagery is stellar. Top stuff.

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LeeAnn Azzopardi 01 December 2022

Mike this was a hoot to read Top 5 Kudos

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David Wood 01 December 2022

A great write, keep it up.5*

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