'I'm leaving you now, '
Said the leaf to the branch.
'Have a safe journey, '
Replied the branch to the leaf.
As the leaf fluttered off
To only God knows where,
Naked branch prepares
For winter's coming grief.
Marvellous piece of poetry. Great images. Top score. Onto MyFavourites
Winter leaves all things bare. A great evocative look at winter. Imagery is stellar. Top stuff.
Mike this was a hoot to read Top 5 Kudos
A great write, keep it up.5*
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.I would like to translate this poem
Great metaphorical write. Separation is painful but inevitable.