Seven Deer Poem by M. Asim Nehal

Seven Deer

Rating: 5.0


At an Inescapable waterbody nearby
a family of deer was drinking water with caution.
A sudden glow in the eastern sky, followed by coded bird song, perhaps unaware of the pride of lions plotting an attack on them. A monkey, appeared like a flag unfurled
and jumped onto a nearby tree.
It was an appropriate warning of impending danger.
Two of the seven deer panicked,
and the other five surrounded to comfort them.
The ancient moonlight witnessed a failed strategy
when a naïve lion roared out of nowhere.
Tonight, the seven deer flew through the air
on their legs to reach a safe haven.
All of this occurred prior to the sunrise,
and the sun brought with it a new day and new life.

Monday, March 20, 2023
Topic(s) of this poem: story,night
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Kim Barney 19 January 2024

Too bad they all got away. At the least, one should stay. This, friend Asim, is true: lions have to eat, too.

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LeeAnn Azzopardi 19 January 2024

Wonderful piece Asim bravo and Thanks for sharing! ! ! !

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Anjandev Roy 19 January 2024

Extremely well penned.... thank u...my friend..

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