Severe Jolt Poem by Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Severe Jolt

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You gave me jolt without any clue
Was all of sudden as if bolt from blue?
It was shot in bull but hook miscued
No escape route to go for and rescued

Well it was not wise but your decision
You might have thought over with precision
Simple misgivings cannot take us further
Relation can exist not any longer

What happens if one distrusts another?
Who will help for feelings to smoother?
Dooms day in offing and can’t be far away
Uncertainty will prevail and have its sway

You gave preference to your feelings
Under heavy pressure I was reeling
Exerting pressure for final sealing
Emotions I was hardly concealing

I extended hand with noble gesture
You saw in it no stable future
Was it enough or steps mature?
You thought the relations below stature

Nothing will go straight and right say
Relation will strain and not pave the way
Time may come when will have to part
Many questions even if try to be smart

You are not sure of what is right
Why scuffle and unnecessary fight?
Can’t see a reason even in day light
Weakest among even with enough might

I shall bear the blow and brunt
Fingers as such I have burnt
Why to blame you for silly cause?
I may wait for time and small pause

I know you will go and sleep
I may resent and almost weep
Still as man I will maintain and keep
Bury the differences in shallow sea deep

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Lalvani Rekha 29 August 2009

Was it enough or steps mature? You thought the relations below stature........10

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Chetna Purohit 29 August 2009

It was shot in bull but hook miscued No escape route to go for and rescued.........10

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Pami Panchal 29 August 2009

You gave preference to your feelings Under heavy pressure I was reeling Exerting pressure for final sealing....10

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Umesh Lalvani 29 August 2009

it s so nice and enjoyable poem////////10

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Louis Rams 29 August 2009

there are times that we can not bury what we feel inside because then to yourself you lie.

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Indani Narayan 09 October 2009

You gave me jolt without any clue Was all of sudden as if bolt from blue? It was shot in bull but hook miscued

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Sulochna Pandit 09 October 2009

Well it was not wise but your decision You might have thought over with precision Simple misgivings cannot take us further

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Raju Rajput 09 October 2009

You gave me jolt without any clue Was all of sudden as if bolt from blue?

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Maulin Shah 07 October 2009

What happens if one distrusts another? Who will help for feelings to smoother?

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Sagarika Shah 06 September 2009

What happens if one distrusts another? Who will help for feelings to smoother?

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India
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