Shade Poem by Soran M. H

Shade

Rating: ★5.0

when night falls
in his silence
The heart is filled with rhythm
Look behind the window:
There is a shadow
dissipates loneliness
does not sleep…
Even after the vigil is surrendered
***
Morning glow
Smiling between the hills
Makes your shadow long
on the narrow paths
following you
but
when you lose the way
disappears
***
Before reaching the ambush of spiders
The sun will be behind
And the shadow is longer
extending in front of you
before reaching the crowd
again it disappears
you do not know
Maybe
from a far angle
it looks at you furtively.
***
when
your feet tremble,
you fall
But the shadow
does not fall
***
night will makes the warriors
fall asleep again
But the shadow alone does not sleep
***
Sleep in those moments that
are behind the window
dissipates loneliness

Friday, July 28, 2023
Topic(s) of this poem: loneliness
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Sylvia Frances Chan 28 July 2023

This poem contains an amazing philosophy about life, I have enjoyed tremendously, Soran. Top Marks (means 5 Stars Full or the 10 points in the past time) . TFS

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Soran M. H 29 September 2026

Thank you very much. Thus, the shadow transforms silence into words and images; I hope you enjoy it.

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Tom Allport 23 September 2026

A sad reality if only shadows could talk...well penned

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 22 September 2026

Very evocative write. The shadow has been explored in so many angles and painted into a complex entity showing the mastery of the Poet in abstract poetry. A masterstroke!

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 22 September 2026

A poem of great depth that blurs the line between the physical world and the spiritual or psychological realm. I concur with Kevin's and Sylvia's comments: immaculate imagery and poetic expressions and amazing philosophy in life. To my favorites.

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Soran M. H 29 September 2026

Thank you, Rosemary, for this insightful and rich reading, which adds another dimension to the connotations.

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Kevin Patrick 28 July 2023

The imagery and the wording are immaculate, its like a painting of Friedrich, a heightened sense of reality. Superb my friend! to my favorites

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