Soul X Dream - Now Poem by Soran M. H

Soul X Dream - Now

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Soul X Dream - Now

Part of you
Not related to the present
is chosen for you! *
how to return to the past
even to complete it,
eventually when you wake up
Shedding warm tears
or be quiet for hours
whenever remember these dreams
you will shiver
it is a time of isolation
from all human beings,
Evil,
Everything
.
Part of you
Relates to the past
is chosen for you!
-atmosphere, you find yourself in
- who do you meet and how?
sometimes it is a weak father
or a depressed mother!
then you wake up
the present will turn
into unpleasant moment
such as a bunch of grapes
that squeezed between the fingers
.
Part of you
is related to the future
It guides you to the predictions,
and to the unknown places
it chooses for you!
- which marginalized area to be in
- or meets which toiling new faces …
as it seems the future too
has not got good news yet
like groans in pain
in long dark night
without sunrise
.
O dream**
O the hidden side of the life of the soul
even if a distant star shines in you
It will herald happiness for days
but chrysanthemums and jasmine
Will never germinate
on heartless rocks
or on the hot soil
that all tracks will disappear there..

………………………………………

* could be the ‘id', 'ego', 'super-ego.
Or any other outer Triggers or energy.

** According to the surrealist and Jacques Lacan's theory; the dream could be a rich source for inspiration that contains Allegorical connotations and metaphorical figurative.

Soul X Dream - Now
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Dominic Windram 08 June 2020

Excellent poem Soran...it's so edifying to read something so powerful inspired by the Surrealists and Jacques Lacan. It's definitely a 10 from!

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Soran M. H 08 June 2020

Thanks dear poet Dominic for reading my humble poem. I hope you enjoyed reading it. Yes, you are right, the wide world of the soul is rarely written about it.

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Soran M. H 08 June 2020

Dear brilliant poet Robert, you are always one of the first who read my new humble poems. This indicates your keenness on poetry and the intensity of your instinctive knowledge in this field. Thank you and I wish you a good health and wellness.

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Clive Culverhouse 08 June 2020

the hidden side of the life of the soul nicely put

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Soran M. H 07 August 2020

Dear Valsa George thank you for your deep reading by the way as you have mentioned the memory goes backward and forward as well inside the dream... the forward action is not knowing by every one. your comment has enriched the theme of the poem so much, cheers

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Valsa George 06 August 2020

We have no control over our dreams, but we can sublimate our bitter experiences into positive vibes and perhaps even change our dreamscape into seeing beautiful dreams. Dreams is a complex topic, many thinkers and philosophers like Carl Jung and Sigmund Freud have tried to analyse. Your poem on this complex topic is so illuminative and sheds a lot of light on the complex phenomenon called human mind and its manifold thoughts.

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Valsa George 06 August 2020

Our life is interspersed in the past, the present and even the future. Many of our memories lie coagulated in our subconscious and they bob up occasionally as dreams. Many of them are related to life situations, though some may seem far off from mundane realities. These dreams affect our moods.

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Bharati Nayak 20 June 2020

The most important role that our dream plays lies in dreaming for future.Let this dream be one of beauty, one of love and one of inspiration that will guide us through darkness.You may call it day-dream, but it is very essential to keep us motivated and live life full of joy.(part-3)

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Soran M. H 21 June 2020

Dear poet Bharati, Hi...the Dream is a hidden side of the soul’s life, but the most difficult point is that it is not under our control, We all hope to see sweet and optimistic dreams Thank you very much for your important additions on this topic, which it can be very beneficial for the poetic creativity

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Bharati Nayak 20 June 2020

What are dreams? Why we dream? Perhaps scientists and psychologists may explain it.In my view, dreams are key to our very existence.Our moment to moment living, our experiences are gathered in our memory and we may re-live them time and again through our dreams.Our stronger emotions like love/hate, fear/horror, are deeply etched in our psyche and we see them in our dreams.(Part-2)

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