! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ***shadow Of Dream***! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! Poem by Dr subhendu kar

! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ***shadow Of Dream***! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! !

Rating: 4.8


SHADOW OF DREAM

dappled wings of love awe in void
as sultry wind blows on elysian bay
butterfly gently ruffles over tuft green
looking to grin of green on its den.

night yet awaits deep in lone silence
birds chirrup falling alike in its nest
moon yet knows quest of wild waves
as when anchored to its depth of ocean

eyes rill on silky shadow of dream
murky silence may ruin the sleep
breath from sultry breeze enlightens heart
yet look ahead to the tree jingling in rain

storm crunches flower’s beauty of grace
speckle of whisper ingrains in its veil
thirst mills through sands of resurgence
blue slowly deciphers code of midnight love,

breeze still riffles across mute glow
beauty slowly expiates from head of lily
luscious resilience seem to inflame within
betiding, to reach the moon ness on hill top

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Danny H 30 June 2009

i lvoe the imagery, imagination, an devotion it was very beautiful. an insightful well done: keep on writing!

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Poetic Soul 30 June 2009

Well written, I like the imagery of it as well.

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Christina Phan 01 July 2009

This piece was wonderful Nice imagery I can picture this all clearly kept it up Dr 10++

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Ch J Satyananda Kumar 01 July 2009

You are a great lover of nature it seem. The poem is great, Dr. Kar.

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Pancho Villa 01 July 2009

Excellent use of imagery! This poem is worthy of a 10.

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Udaya Shankar Pant 11 December 2009

very good and environmental! ..10 from me

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Jimmy Reed 18 October 2009

so beautiful...lovely write.......10

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Aziz Alkaabi 09 September 2009

If this is a shadow of a dream, the dream I think would be in Nervana. This so enchanting and delicately surreal. I read it slowly and contemplated between the lines. This is what the work of this astonishing author requires; patient slow read blended with respect and that desire to learn and cherish what you learn and I guarantee a soaring to serine places and elysian bays. I am so happy i started my day reading this superb poem. Thank you Dr. Subhendu for sharing your gift with us.

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there is a poet in me! 01 September 2009

so beautiful...lovely write....thanks for sharing....a10+++++

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Carol-Anne Spalding 07 July 2009

I adore this poem..so well written and communicated...you are a talent to be treasured

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Dr subhendu kar

Dr subhendu kar

Bhubaneswar, Odissa, India
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