Shattering Poem by Deepti Agarwal

Shattering



Glass shatters in zillion pieces
very lightly its thrown away
hardly ever remembered...

Heart shatters in zillion pieces
causing irrecoverable damage
remembered through out life...

shattering was common
feelings differed
Pain's unbearable.

~09/04/08~

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Sarwar Chowdhury 28 August 2008

...a fine expression indeed...thanks

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Jyoti Saxena 20 July 2008

simple but touching u hv a penchant for simlifying pain

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Kesav Easwaran 16 July 2008

heart is not made of glass...full of flesh blood and nerves, despite shattered it does remember pains... good theme selection

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