! She Poem by Vidyadhar Durgekar

! She

Rating: 3.0


Beyond the distant shores of seven seas,
Her sparkling smiles still in my memory,
I hear her whisper in the morning breeze,
Like melodious tunes of whispering bee;

I feel her presence in the winds of time,
Like fragrance in the garden of jasmine,
Her smile was like thousand words of gold,
Every minute spent was like lovers abode;

Her smile accompanied dimple on her cheeks
My heart with missed beats for a while it shrinks
The anxiety compounds with bounds and leaps
Those deep reverine eyes with a stare, seem to peep;

She came with motley hopes and greenery,
Kindling heart like the oars in placid reverine,
Her smiles and whispers are in my heart’s granary,
Which shall remain with me in my deep memory;

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
LIV MEALONE 10 October 2008

a poem full of hearts! :) Nice one!

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anurag duggal 10 October 2008

its a good start....and youll improve ill advise you to read some classical poets like keats and wordsworth...otherwise a nice effort

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Reshma Ramesh 10 October 2008

wow....i was reading it with my breath held..........it is beautiful......10! ! (is it really for me?)

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Indira Babbellapati 12 October 2008

a sweet n lyrical tribute....

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Rakhi Jayashankar 11 October 2008

This poem itself show how much you love ur wife she s very lucky to have you in her life keep writing for your sweet wife kudos 10

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Sathyanarayana M V S 11 October 2008

This beautiful poem echoed so many of my poems, viz. WE ARE NEARING SHORE, WE'LL MEET etc. The structure is so good, words wonderfulllllllll.10

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C T Heart 11 October 2008

guess you'll have many hearts melt down from this...a 10.

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Anjali Sinha 10 October 2008

wow I feel yur presence in the garden of jasmines--is this really for me tooooooooo! ! ! ! ! ! +10 regards anjali (read mine ANSWER-WHY DO U LOVE ME)

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