She Is Poem by James McLain

James McLain

James McLain

From Tampa Florida And Still Living Near By

She Is

Rating: 4.9


Like a bird to see her sitting, roses are
of passions dream, in sight her flight.
Butterfly's know her grace, touches many
all, weeping softly, others without, it is sadly.
Ants march to her smell, hidden never off
to carry bubbles, her journeys path, is clear.
Essenes of berries in her, moistness air laden
dears follow, youth will, never currents to cross.
raises wind, cover embodies still, covered up
she, glories light golden, honey is her, in poise.
Yet she knows, she fav'es him, his heart just bursts...
It loves you just the way you are, it is such in love,
it is so full of you it's crushed..to burst your sun.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Carol Gall 25 May 2009

words that weave a picture 10

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a truly beautiful poem poetry..well done 10+++

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Elizabeth Resendiz 26 May 2009

its really beautiful

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Ashleymarie love 27 May 2009

beautiful Ashleymarie

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Marieta Maglas 20 June 2009

wonderful simile: ''like a bird to see her sitting, roses are of passions dream, in sight her flight.'' well written poem..10++

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Ashraful Musaddeq 09 June 2009

Love this composition.

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Shashendra Amalshan 06 June 2009

Is it poetry? ...hey this is poetry indeed...great words nice beautiful words..liked them very much..great sir..A+++

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. . 05 June 2009

So many are your prose but this scent caught my nose. How beautiful is she to me that even an old 'Goth' can see! :)

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Miriam Maia Padua 03 June 2009

beautiful... lots of beautiful pictures lovely descriptions 10++ maia

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James McLain

James McLain

From Tampa Florida And Still Living Near By
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