Bernard F. Asuncion

Gold Star - 252,887 Points (July 30,1967 / Subic, Philippines)

She Turned My Life Around - Poem by Bernard F. Asuncion

She turned my life around,
When I finally found her;
Changing my whole being,
As well as my character.

Every time I see her,
Inspires my heart and my soul;
The sound of her voice
Makes me reach my greatest goal.

As she holds my hand,
Joy is just beyond compare;
Saying sweet things to me,
Sharing her true love and care.

A single day without her
Is like driving me crazy;
Not feeling her soft touch
Crushes my mind and body.

Like a fragrant flower
Is the smell of her soft skin;
Keeping me well and fine
To love her over again.

She took me up and high,
When I was so low and down;
She had filled the gap,
As she turned my life around.

Topic(s) of this poem: love

Form: Quatrain

Comments about She Turned My Life Around by Bernard F. Asuncion

  • Rajnish Manga (4/21/2018 2:41:00 AM)

    A poem of gratitude. Thanks for sharing. (Report) Reply

    Bernard F. Asuncion (4/21/2018 3:08:00 AM)

    Thank you so much, Dear Rajnish for the fine feedback. It means a lot to me🙏🙏🙏

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  • (4/20/2018 9:32:00 PM)

    This poem can truly make a heart feel like a butterfly kiss. Wonderful! (Report) Reply

    Bernard F. Asuncion (4/21/2018 3:07:00 AM)

    Thanks, dear Mercedes for the comforting comment🙏🙏🙏

  • (8/27/2015 5:26:00 AM)

    The spontaneous flow of emotions expressed in the poem is excellent. True love is very powerful and can bring about great changes in the loved one. (Report) Reply

    Bernard F. Asuncion (4/21/2018 3:06:00 AM)

    Dear Ratnakar, thank you for the wonderful comment🙏🙏🙏

  • (8/27/2015 1:25:00 AM)

    Fascinatingly beautiful poetical portrait of love changing an entire being's attitude and character. Touching innocence within your poem, very lovely and tender. Thank you for sharing. RoseAnn (Report) Reply

    Bernard F. Asuncion (4/21/2018 3:04:00 AM)

    Thanks, dear RoseAnn for the heartwarming remark🙏🙏🙏

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Poem Submitted: Wednesday, August 26, 2015

Poem Edited: Tuesday, April 24, 2018

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