Shell Of Tears! ! - Poem by VIPINS PUTHOORAN

When thou break the shell of tear
I see there a world of cheers.
Where I begin to breathe eternity
Like thine solemn jannitor of purity.
Wilt thou put me again in a shell?
Will have I to live there like in a hell?
E'erything will be changed in time:
The cheers and the happiness
Of the peers' and their greatness;
Thy kith and kin and all the prime
And thou wilt see nothing all around,
When they lead thee to burial ground.
Though this life may lose surrealism;
My soul will enter His Imperialism.

Topic(s) of this poem: life

Comments about Shell Of Tears! ! by VIPINS PUTHOORAN

  • (1/9/2012 2:21:00 PM)

    Hey, are you really from Kerala?
    What a classy style! ! ! .......10*****
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  • (1/5/2012 1:35:00 AM)

    WOW! ! ! it is an amazing poem... speaks a lot... n delivers a lot! ! ! Absolutely loved reading it.... it has a classical touch too.......... (Report) Reply

  • Rigzin Namgyal (1/3/2012 11:37:00 AM)

    ..i admire this brilliant piece of writing my friend.. really are good...this was an amazing poem...
    ..i just loved reading it..
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  • Supriya Prathapan (1/2/2012 9:30:00 AM)

    This poem adds beauty to the very idea of Death. Well written. (Report) Reply

  • (1/1/2012 6:29:00 AM)

    uffff great write! wonderrful! (Report) Reply

  • Rm. Shanmugam Chettiar (12/30/2011 7:43:00 AM)

    i value the way u think st this young age. good (Report) Reply

  • Shamba Kaunda (12/28/2011 2:58:00 PM)

    what a way to play with words nyc job (Report) Reply

  • (12/28/2011 1:41:00 PM)

    Gladly I received your invitation to read your poem (Shell of Tears) . I think it is good all of it especially the last line. However, I don't like using old words like THOU, THY, and THINE. They would make the poem look as if it did not belong to this age.Free yourself of all bounds of fomal limits like rythem and rime.
    Best Regards
    P.S. You may read my poem entitled (Tripartite)
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  • Neetha Sasidharan (12/28/2011 5:34:00 AM)

    nice rhyming words n nice idea (Report) Reply

  • (12/26/2011 9:05:00 AM)

    Great theme. Brilliant presentation.Apt usage. (Report) Reply

  • Rm. Shanmugam Chettiar (12/26/2011 8:55:00 AM)

    an advanced thought from a youth (Report) Reply

  • (12/25/2011 12:20:00 AM)

    'Though this life may lose surrealism- / My soul will enter His Imperialism' (pretty words) (Report) Reply

  • (12/24/2011 9:46:00 AM)

    deep meaningful words are really outstanding and shown the pen of a real poet. great! (Report) Reply

  • (12/24/2011 7:41:00 AM)

    nice one, keep it up u have so much to tell to this hell kind of world i m sure u will change so many things by ur beautiful world (Report) Reply

  • Cosmic Dreamer (12/23/2011 4:44:00 PM)

    It is my view that the soul is eternal and this body we possess is temporary... So it is our duty to learn and become more than we were meant to be... Only then may heaven become a reality... Very nice poem... (Report) Reply

  • Jacqui Broad (12/22/2011 12:45:00 AM)

    Very beautiful... Actually amazing... (Report) Reply

  • (12/20/2011 12:49:00 PM)

    A great poem. The soul will always rise.
    Great write.
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  • Sajna Kailas (12/20/2011 5:21:00 AM)

    wow! ! ! ! ! ! pleasure to read your poems Vipin chetta! something is special in your each poems! this is a very brilliant poem. greatly thought provoking and philosophical one.
    you have a very good point of view about life.
    well done Pal! ! !
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  • Unwritten Soul (12/20/2011 4:44:00 AM)

    You live in best shell Vipins, break the wall when it separate you between sad and happy.. you done a brilliant poem like usual Vipins, roll your emotion in the paper for thought grow and move in right motion...that we call an inspiration! _Unwritten Soul (Report) Reply

  • Andrew Blakemore (12/20/2011 4:17:00 AM)

    A very well written piece Vipins, well done. (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Sunday, December 18, 2011

Poem Edited: Sunday, September 11, 2016

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