Shell Of Tears! ! Poem by VIPINS PUTHOORAN

Shell Of Tears! !

Rating: 5.0


When thou break the shell of tear
I see there a world of cheers.
Where I begin to breathe eternity
Like thine solemn jannitor of purity.
Wilt thou put me again in a shell?
Will have I to live there like in a hell?
E'erything will be changed in time:
The cheers and the happiness
Of the peers' and their greatness;
Thy kith and kin and all the prime
And thou wilt see nothing all around,
When they lead thee to burial ground.
Though this life may lose surrealism;
My soul will enter His Imperialism.

Sunday, December 18, 2011
Topic(s) of this poem: life
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Dave Walker 20 December 2011

A great poem. The soul will always rise. Great write.

0 0 Reply
Jacqui Broad 22 December 2011

Very beautiful... Actually amazing...

0 0 Reply
Cosmic Dreamer 23 December 2011

It is my view that the soul is eternal and this body we possess is temporary... So it is our duty to learn and become more than we were meant to be... Only then may heaven become a reality... Very nice poem...

0 0 Reply
Kenebo Rajkumar 24 December 2011

deep meaningful words are really outstanding and shown the pen of a real poet. great!

0 0 Reply
Aaron Barth-Martinson 25 December 2011

'Though this life may lose surrealism- / My soul will enter His Imperialism' (pretty words)

0 0 Reply
Dead Rose 09 January 2012

Hey, are you really from Kerala? What a classy style! ! ! .......10***** Rose,

0 0 Reply
Blossom Mist 05 January 2012

WOW! ! ! it is an amazing poem... speaks a lot... n delivers a lot! ! ! Absolutely loved reading it.... it has a classical touch too..........

0 0 Reply
Rigzin Namgyal 03 January 2012

..i admire this brilliant piece of writing my friend.. ..you really are good...this was an amazing poem... ..i just loved reading it.. ..

0 0 Reply
Supriya Prathapan 02 January 2012

This poem adds beauty to the very idea of Death. Well written.

0 0 Reply
Areeba Sohail 01 January 2012

uffff great write! wonderrful!

0 0 Reply
READ THIS POEM IN OTHER LANGUAGES
Close
Error Success