Short And Sweet Poem by Herbert Nehrlich

Short And Sweet

Rating: 5.0


A poem from the pen of Rachel,
who has kindly allowed me to refer to her
as my protégée:
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Kiss me 'til I'm dizzy
Spin me like a top
Put me in a tizzy
Never want to stop.

Hug me 'til I'm breathless,
Try to break my back,
Will you come on Christmas
Meet behind the shack?

Whisper 'til I'm deaf, dear,
You must know the words,
You can look for ME here
Not for mockingbirds

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Sandra Osborne 12 January 2008

Nice. I was maybe your student once, now we are equals, at least in longing - CS.. and a 10+ for Rachel, perfect meter and rhythem, well done.

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Thad Wilk 02 January 2008

Hi Herbert! Tell Rachel bravo well done! ! ! *10*! Thad

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Mary Gordley 02 January 2008

Tell Rachel thanks for sharing her pleasant write.

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