Silver Lining Poem by Anne Unknown

Silver Lining

Rating: 5.0


You stand there in the darkness,
people screaming everywhere,
although you want to,
you can't help them,
pain and hate overwhelm you,
and you sink deeper in the darkness...

you wake up and feel happy,
you look around and see only light,
light and happy people,
a light mood hangs above,
you look aside and see your savior,
you see your angel,
you see your silver lining.

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Afzal Shauq 09 October 2009

you wake up and feel happy, you look around and see only light, light and happy people, a light mood hangs above, you look aside and see your savior, you see your angel, you see your silver lining. a good and inspiring poem with good logic and sweet expression and you in your small age did a good task to write good poems and this one is perfectly done..and thanks for your sweet words for me too.. pray for your more success and happy smiles.. really doing a good job..10/10

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John Mcmanus 05 October 2009

This is a very nicely written poem anne, the switch of the narrative from darkness to light between the two stanzas, make for a interesting read, keep it up,10.

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