Simple Words, But A Poem.... Poem by Sylvia Frances Chan
Simple Words, But A Poem....
A.D. Wednesday the 12th of December 2018
Robert,
I am inspired by your thought-provoking poem,
Perhaps for you, it is not, but it IS for me, thank you.
These are just my simple notes, not a poem:
I have here a coin, from this side:
this poem shows how you have been thinking,
you are thinking impressively,
this brevity is the proof,
I admire the way you are thinking
about the things
inside your embodiment within you
the most beautiful
Now I turn my coin to its other side:
please carry your inside to
outside
then you will see
another inside
a world that is wide
wider and widest
than only that curtain that rises.
these words just came up in my mind
and I wanna share these with you,
so many thank you
from my side
I ignite
the second candle of Advent
thank you so much
for your temperament.
God´s Blessings perpetually
upon thee and thy beloved family.
©Sylvia Frances Chan
The Second Week of Advent 2018
The 12th of December 2018
@ 9.09hrs. A.M. West-European Time
the second candle of Advent
thank you so much
for your temperament.
God´s Blessings perpetually
upon thee and thy beloved family.
©Sylvia Frances Chan
The Second Week of Advent 2018
The 12th of December 2018
@ 9.09hrs. A.M. West-European Time
God's blessings transform both sides of the coin including inner core. A nice poem of brevity is well penned. This has deep insight. This seems t o be an answer to another poet.'s poem. A positive perspective is reflected.10
Thank you so much dear Master Poet Kumarmani Mahakul Sir. You know that I always appreciate all what you do and say about my poem. Each time I learn more from your valuable comments and precious-honest compliments. I know and do realize that. Indeed, Robert's poem is not available anymore. That's why I cannot refer.Thank you for your precious 10, Sir.
God´s Blessings perpetually upon thee and thy beloved family. Simple words but so nice and sublime. Thank you Sylvia.
Your supporting comments make me always happy, Dr. Geeta. Your precious words I most appreciate Thank you once again.
Thank you so much for thy sympathetic response, Dr. Geeta, as sympathetic as thyself. Thank YOU!
I ignite the second candle of Advent thank you so much for your temperament....earnest wish, beautiful rendition of words! A wonderful poem friend.....10
Your visit most appreciated. I must find more time to read and comment your poems, but as a lecturer of students that is oft a problem. But I am accustomed to this, sure Dillip Poet.
Thank you so much once again, Dillip for your supportive comments and precious-honest compliments. Keep Blessed you and your beloved family
Thank you for quoting my poem, thank you so much for your friendly comment and lovely compliment, friend, also for your ten.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
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God's Blessings be greatest for thee and thy beloved family, dear Master Poet Kumarmani Mahakul Sir. Amen.