Akhtar Jawad

Gold Star - 99,899 Points (8-2-1945 / Gorakhpur)

Sitting On A Bridal Stage - Poem by Akhtar Jawad

What are the daughters!
What are the grand daughters!
Sitting on a bridal stage,
adding a beautiful page,
in a language to be felt only,
a bud of rose for smelt only,
set in a mold of dreams,
slowly swimming in the nature's streams,
seeing themselves as a bride of future,
an awaited and thrilling adventure,
hoping to get love of a lovely spouse,
at the cost of their years old house.
May I order you God?
If not, I request a nod,
give me a blessing moment for once only,
can you give it at once only?
A moment in that I can order to you,
after that I shall surrender to you,
you will not erase this beautiful page,
promise her before she leaves the stage!

Topic(s) of this poem: dreaming


Comments about Sitting On A Bridal Stage by Akhtar Jawad

  • Edward Kofi Louis (1/20/2016 1:18:00 AM)


    A beautiful page of life; with the muse of love. Nice work. (Report) Reply

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  • Nosheen Irfan (1/18/2016 12:33:00 AM)


    Marriage is indeed a new page to a person's book. For a girl it is more so because she has to leave everything behind. A beautiful theme to write on with deep feeling of affection for daughters and granddaughters. A lovely picture to go with a lovely thought. (Report) Reply

  • Kelly Kurt (1/17/2016 2:22:00 AM)


    A lovely photo and a very lovely thought. (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Saturday, January 16, 2016

Poem Edited: Saturday, January 16, 2016


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