mithilesh yadav

Gold Star - 8,287 Points (14-09-1985 / GORAKHPUR)

Sixth Sense Comfort....Part 1 - Poem by mithilesh yadav

It's a blessing may be some time, sometime it is like a crush………..
Some time it really hurts to be unsafe ……
Some time it really hurts to be in society……
Oh god I feel someone looking at me, staring at me and like challenging me ……
To safe myself from his lusty eyes, to safe myself from this dangerous view…….

Every time I be alone and may be some time in hundreds of all…….
Those eyes still try to entrap my safety and comfort………
May be those eyes think I am not watching, but what the hell of this sixth sinse…….

Oh god you have given me this sense, it always feel eyes staring at me and like challenging me ……
To safe myself from these lusty eyes, to safe myself from this dangerous view…….

Sometime friends some time neighbours some time even someone in relation…….
Many a times those eyes are attacking many a times those eyes are scarring ……..
Many a time they test my gesture, they test my patience and my ignorance……..

Oh god you have given me this sense, it always feel eyes staring at me and like challenging me ……
To safe myself from these lusty eyes, to safe myself from this dangerous view…….

Oh god could you have given a kind view to those eyes…..
You could have made them understand the pain we feel from there lust and greed………..
Could you ever be able to change those views, those eyes to respect and honour us……….

Oh god you have given me this sense, it always feel eyes staring at me and like challenging me ……
To safe myself from these lusty eyes, to safe myself from this dangerous view…….

Those eyes to be able to recognise the mothers and sisters and daughters in the flesh they view…
Those eyes to feel the love for every mother, sister, daughter ….like their own they love………
Those eyes to feel the pain of every mother, sister, daughter ….. like their own they feel…..
Oh god you have given me this sense, it always feel eyes staring at me and like challenging me ……
To safe myself from these lusty eyes, to safe myself from this dangerous view…….

Topic(s) of this poem: women empowerment


Comments about Sixth Sense Comfort....Part 1 by mithilesh yadav

  • Nilay Vyas (12/21/2016 1:10:00 AM)

    Sixth Sense Comfort....Part 1
    its an very awesome poem (Report) Reply

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  • Nosheen Irfan (12/21/2016 12:34:00 AM)


    A very powerful n heartfelt write from women's point of view. Sixth sense can indeed be a test for a woman. A10. (Report) Reply

  • Marie Shine (12/20/2016 10:34:00 AM)

    Sixth Sense Comfort
    A revolutionary write where the blessings of having a sixth sense comes to the fore. A seventh sense has now been discovered. Our senses are divided into the exteroceptive and interoceptive and either 6th or 7th sense is not something which every human being is blessed with. Those who have it are truly gifted and because science is not advanced enough to detect and measure 6th and 7th sense energy fields, such phenomena is illegitimised as paranormal, and even ridiculed by most human beings who do not have it. However, that is beginning to fade now. More and more are believing in the ability that some human beings have. A wonderful poem, a topical topic and one not easy to write on, but you have completed the task excellently. Women are not safe in beautiful India and like you, I also believe that education is vital to change this, but first it must begin in the home where husbands, brothers, relatives show respect for women, so that younger eyes and ears can learn from what they see and hear and then, school will back that up with knowledge. Women need to be empowered and no longer be treated like second class citizens, but how easy it will be to achieve this is unknown. It must begin somewhere and that somewhere is in the home. Thank you for sharing this excellently crafted poem. It was a privilege to read it. God bless you always... (Report) Reply

    Mithilesh Yadav Mithilesh Yadav (12/20/2016 10:50:00 AM)

    Thank you so much mam ji for your valuable comments........ About paranormal s yes according to Indian vedic knowledge also there is believed to be 7 senses but then what normally practiced in our society is that of 6 only.... Out of which Sixth is believed to be a blessing... Well thanks for sharing with me such a wide description............... But according to your likes I would request you to go through my SOUM #1-8 AND SOUM SERIES BEGINS #1.... I assure you that you will like it and you certainly will have lot to add on those poems...... Hope to learn a lot from your in future also..... Thanks

  • Geetha Jayakumar (12/19/2016 2:45:00 AM)


    Beautiful write Mithilesh on sixth sense. Actually many are blessed with sixth sense but when lust or jealousy overpowers the mind then all these crimes take place. I loved the topic you choose. Keep writing. (Report) Reply

    Mithilesh Yadav Mithilesh Yadav (12/19/2016 8:24:00 AM)

    Thanks for your valuable comment mam., ...... Yes will keep writing you can also give your comments on SIXTH sense comfort # 2......

  • Akhtar Jawad (1/24/2016 7:57:00 AM)


    Oh god you have given me this sense, it always feel eyes staring at me and like challenging me ……
    To safe myself from these lusty eyes, to safe myself from this dangerous view……. Sixth sense is the sense of super ego and super ego is the seat of God. Sixth sense is the voice of God. In Hindi it's suresh and in Urdu it's sarosh. when we are talking to God in fact we are talking to our super ego. I was so much pleased to read a poem from a poem by a Gorakhpuri poet, as I was born at Gorakhpur and I am a graduate from Gorakhpur University. Mithilesh Yadav while looking at others' women we forget some one else might be looking our women with the same dirt. You have written a wonderful poem. I am sur it's suresh.
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  • Bharati Nayak (1/24/2016 5:40:00 AM)


    Women is not safe- -being the target of lust from various quarters. I don't totally agree with this view point.The demon - Lust -is hiding in some depraved human mind.It is an aberration, not a general pattern.Like other demonic behavior of criminals, it is one such behavioral degradation found in some people.And such depravity was also present from ancient times, the stories in mythology tell about such things.But it is always hated and good people always came forward to protect the dignity of women.
    Nowadays why cases of molestation or rape increasing, I will attribute it to T.V, and other means of visual media which are repeatedly highlighting things and graphically showing pictures for their ratings, people in families seeing them unabashedly, .They are feeding minds with depraved thoughts,
    We should advise our children to read good books, watch good movies, so that they will impact their mind to do good things.But now on T.V. and internet children are exposed to all types of nasty things and thereby corrupting their minds.We all as a society suffering for it.
    Thanks for sharing a poem on the sensitive issue
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    Mithilesh Yadav Mithilesh Yadav (1/24/2016 6:38:00 AM)

    Great mam thanx for your value addition that is what I want to do by this concept to purify the thoughts of our young generation I.e our boys to be able to value there counterpart in the society..... Thanx for taking out time for my poem.....will keep in ur views in mind while preparing the final components of the topic

  • (1/23/2016 5:27:00 PM)


    Great poem. I too believe that more or less we all are bestowed with this sixth sense. Our intensity may be different but we all can relate to the situations when we sense the danger behind us or see evil intentions in some eyes with out having a word exchanged. Wether this sixth sense is an added gift to some or can be developed by human effort I couldn't say. Some say practices in meditation can help to develop it. May be there are some other methods too. It is always wonderful to add on to one's survival and defending skills. Can we go as far as stopping others to have thoughts of lust and intentions of inflicting harm to others, and have them cultivate a better sense of love and care in their heart, is other side of this concept. Almost like a belief in prayer to avert the oncoming danger approaching from outside. Your poem is excellent in expressing this concept often reserved for mystics and saints of higher consciousness. It would be great to read more from you as you explore and express it. Thank you for sharing. (Report) Reply

  • Dr.tony Brahmin (1/23/2016 12:03:00 PM)


    To safe myself from these lusty eyes, to safe myself from this dangerous view…… a nice concept.
    but i hve many questions.. what is this exactly. write more about the sixth sense concept. you want to educate the girls of your society about it. how will u do it. sixth sense comfort....... what are your aims in achieving it.
    how wil u do it.
    what are the teaching components. would u please write about it. thankyou for your attempt to begin with something very new. tony
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    Mithilesh Yadav Mithilesh Yadav (1/23/2016 12:36:00 PM)

    It is believed that every person has a SIXTH SENSE which enables to feel him or her any eye on him or by any distance....... So the concept gave me an idea to unfold a mass education programme of SIXTH SENSE COMFORT...... Through which we as a good human beings and men on earth PROMISE ourselves and to the humanity to provide SIXTH SENSE COMFORT to all our great ladies in society..... Let us make it a big campaign educate our younger boys from 8 th to 12 th std boys to ensure the SIXTH SENCE COMFORT to all the girls in our society.......

    This poem series will be my efforts to make this concept a revolution..... Request All seniors to add there valuable comment on this.....

    Mithilesh Yadav Mithilesh Yadav (1/23/2016 12:14:00 PM)

    Just the other way...... Sir I wanna this concept to be taught to our boys.... and educate and make them responsible to be able to provide a SIXTH SENSE COMFORT to all girls in society and treat them equally as they do it to there own mother, sister and daughters......... ... And as far as teaching components is concern I am in process of collecting those components.............. I am selecting best verses of vedas which teaches to respect women power and other such examples from holy books..... also need all possible comments and add ups from allmseniors like u here........ thanx for reading and showing intrest......

  • Abhilasha Bhatt (1/23/2016 11:52:00 AM)


    A good work u have done....keep it up.....amazingly narrated.....thank you for sharing :) (Report) Reply

    Mithilesh Yadav Mithilesh Yadav (1/23/2016 11:55:00 AM)

    thanx mam..... wana some inputs if u would have anything to add on this topic any time now or in future...

  • Mithilesh Yadav (1/21/2016 6:06:00 AM)


    It is believed that every person has a SIXTH SENSE which enables to feel him or her any eye on him or by any distance....... So the concept gave me an idea to unfold a mass education programme of SIXTH SENSE COMFORT ...... Through which we as a good human beings and men on earth PROMISE ourselves and to the humanity to provide SIXTH SENSE COMFORT to all our great ladies in society..... Let us make it a big campaign educate our younger boys from 8 th to 12 th std boys to ensure the SIXTH SENCE COMFORT to all the girls in our society.......

    This poem series will be my efforts to make this concept a revolution..... Request All seniors to add there valuable comment on this......
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