Skin Cancer Poem by Kim Barney

Kim Barney

Kim Barney

I was born in a bank - - my mother went there and made a deposit

Skin Cancer

Rating: 5.0

My skin cancer is not a disgrace;
I can't help what appears on my face.
When I rise from the dead
and you look at my head,
of those blemishes there'll be no trace.

Skin Cancer
Wednesday, October 28, 2020
Topic(s) of this poem: health,resurrection
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
My siblings and I are 'downwinders'* and have a long history of skin cancer and other cancers. One sister just had cancer surgery yesterday. Two days ago I visited my dermatologist and had several pre-cancerous spots on my head and arms frozen with liquid nitrogen. They also did a biopsy on one area of my face. Today they called and informed me that the biopsy revealed basal cell cancer, so I am scheduled for Mohs surgery in a couple of weeks.... *Downwinders are people who lived downwind from the atomic bomb testing in Nevada in the 1950's. The radioactive fallout from the testing drifted into southern Utah where we lived and caused many different kinds of cancer. My mother died of leukemia at age 44. When we are resurrected, we will have no imperfections. I will even get my hair and my missing fingers back.
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Grace Diane Jessen 15 November 2020

Well done. A timely limerick with good meter and rhyme. Also, true!

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Bernard F. Asuncion 29 October 2020

A well crafted piece. Truly poetic...5 stars*****

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Kim Barney 04 November 2020

Thank you, Bernard. I appreciate the comment.

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 28 October 2020

Imperfections or blemishes on our body are tempered by the goodness in our heart. A wonderful and touching poem. Liked the Poet's Notes. Very informative. Top Marks.

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Kim Barney 04 November 2020

Thank you, Rose Marie. Your comments are always so positive and uplifting.

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Douglas Scotney 28 October 2020

You've lived to a ripe old age though, Kim. good luck. Doug.

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Kim Barney 04 November 2020

Part 2 of reply: Also, you make it sound as though my skin cancer is a death sentence. It is not. As I said, I have had skin cancer many times before. If left intreated, it can indeed be deadly. Thanks again for commenting.

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Kim Barney 04 November 2020

Thanks, Doug, but, hey, I'm not that ripe and I'm not all that old! You didn't really think that I'm 105 as my profile says, did you? As far as I know, I was the first to put the maximum age as my own. Later, many others followed suit.

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Kevin Patrick 28 October 2020

As someone who found a mole that appeared suddenly in January this poem raised an eye brow. Having done research on skin cancer I discovered I could be a good candidate. White, blue eyes and dark blond hair, also easy to burn skin. I am sad to hear of the misfortune you have been given Kim, I never heard of downwinders until now, what a cruel thing to go through, the carelessness of the government and military strikes again! I wish you the best.

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Kim Barney 04 November 2020

Thanks, Kevin. There are many books about us downwinders. One that I have right now is American Ground Zero: The Secret Nuclear War by Carole Gallagher Just Google " books about downwinders" and you can find many others.

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