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Sliced By Knife @! - Poem by .Pd. is here

proudly sitting
fear dosen't show
for fate that will follow
it dosent know.
when you slice it
and dice it
the juice spurts out,
satisfactory sound spills
from the killers mouth.

The knife tastes sweet


Comments about Sliced By Knife @! by .Pd. is here

  • Jibin Joseph (1/31/2007 10:19:00 AM)

    i totally agree with jasjiv............ a clever one
    nice work my vote 10
    peace
    jibin
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  • (9/18/2006 5:51:00 AM)

    i loved the start, but then it changed in the end. a killer's mind would work the same way i thought. cleverly averted. (Report)Reply

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  • Frank James Ryan Jr...fjr (9/1/2006 1:20:00 AM)

    AHHH...what a cleveruty of verse, young lady...You play the game so well....tease & please....nice work Preets! ''''''''''''''FJR (Report)Reply

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  • (8/24/2006 10:42:00 PM)

    I love this. It's perfectly everyday, turned into something special! (Report)Reply

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  • (8/22/2006 11:57:00 PM)

    the ending was good then i looked down
    and it got even better.

    enjoyed this
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  • (8/22/2006 2:25:00 PM)

    Once Eve had given the entire apple to Adam and see what had happened..... LOLz.....

    You are truly amazing and have a beautiful frame of mind. The simple things that you write on makes you a very special poet..... I had once said this earlier...You write like an angel!
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  • (8/20/2006 11:16:00 PM)

    i do...thanks...love...nalini...you forgot about the name on the ebook...LOL (Report)Reply

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Poem Submitted: Sunday, August 20, 2006

Poem Edited: Thursday, August 26, 2010


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