Sliced By Knife @! Poem by .Pd. is here

Sliced By Knife @!

Rating: 5.0


proudly sitting
fear dosen't show
for fate that will follow
it dosent know.
when you slice it
and dice it
the juice spurts out,
satisfactory sound spills
from the killers mouth.

The knife tastes sweet

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Nalini Hebbar 20 August 2006

i do...thanks...love...nalini...you forgot about the name on the ebook...LOL

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Catastrophe King 22 August 2006

Once Eve had given the entire apple to Adam and see what had happened..... LOLz..... You are truly amazing and have a beautiful frame of mind. The simple things that you write on makes you a very special poet..... I had once said this earlier...You write like an angel!

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Jibin Joseph 31 January 2007

i totally agree with jasjiv............ a clever one nice work my vote 10 peace jibin

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Jasjiv Singh 18 September 2006

i loved the start, but then it changed in the end. a killer's mind would work the same way i thought. cleverly averted.

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Frank James Ryan Jr...fjr 01 September 2006

AHHH...what a cleveruty of verse, young lady...You play the game so well....tease & please....nice work Preets! ''''''''''''''FJR

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Noemi Lee 24 August 2006

I love this. It's perfectly everyday, turned into something special!

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fanniesson - 22 August 2006

the ending was good then i looked down and it got even better. enjoyed this

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