Slim At The Gym Poem by Kim Barney

Kim Barney

Kim Barney

I was born in a bank - - my mother went there and made a deposit

Slim At The Gym

I once met a young gal in the gym,
and back then I was handsome and slim.
She just loved my torso,
and biceps? Much more so.
'You are just like my husband, My Tim! '

Slim At The Gym
Monday, April 27, 2020
Topic(s) of this poem: husband
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
This was inspired by both Wes Vogler and Tom Billsborough. Tom left a comment on one of Wes's poems. Tom's comment included the word 'Torso'. Wes responded with something like: 'Torso. Now there's a word you don't often see... as a rhyme.' So I decided to use it in a limerick and find a rhyme for it. In addition to the one above, there are others. I'm tired of lying on the floor, so.... I've found the cougar's spoor, so... Wes couldn't shut the door, so... Their boat had washed ashore, so... and there are dozens of others, but I don't have time for any more, so... that's all for now. Thanks, Wes and Tom.
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Sandra Feldman 28 April 2020

Very endearing and original thought By an excellent human being and poet, Caught!

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Kim Barney 28 April 2020

Thanks, Sandra. What a kind thing to say!

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I was born in a bank - - my mother went there and made a deposit
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