Manonton Dalan

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Slim Success - Poem by Manonton Dalan

yesterday was damage control
proposals were frequently crush
confusing players; delayed goals
trust evaporated, rubbing alcohol
clatters on sidelines been noticed
clipboard people showed their teeth

joke when they came around
unrealistic responds bubble up
coupled with sarcastic overflow
frustrating; leaders are clueless
it does cracks cohesiveness
done; how efficient is procedure


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Poem Submitted: Saturday, May 14, 2011

Poem Edited: Monday, May 16, 2011


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