Uriah Hamilton

Small Note

I need a flowery-path destination,
an escape from unhappy solitary confinement
in a personal space of negativity.

Somewhere there is immense sunlight
and a summer park filled with laughter
and beautifully sweet people falling in love.

I want a landscape of plush trees
to replace the barren fields of my emotional failures,
a joyous landscape of potentialities and dreams.

I'm going to write a small note in the sand,
possibly a woman's name
and then disappear into a haunting eternity of bliss.

3: 24 AM 9-19-2020

Topic(s) of this poem: love

Poem Submitted: Saturday, September 19, 2020

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Comments about Small Note by Uriah Hamilton

  • Mark HeathcoteMark Heathcote (9/21/2020 12:16:00 PM)

    Good write Uriah, much enjoyed it.

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  • Suryendu Chaudhury (9/19/2020 8:37:00 AM)

    Optimistic in outlook. Lucid in presentation.

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