Smile She's Here..... Poem by Annette Aitken

Smile She's Here.....

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Smile She's Here

It was four am the clock chimes
sounds of whispers swooning
around the room as if to say,
wake up, wake up, the sun is up
with a yawn and stretch
its time to rise, happy to greet
this beautiful morn with a smile

For there she was in all her glory,
her face as radiant as ever
glowing as she takes a peek from
behind the clouds,
the strands of light reaching,
as if her outstretched arms are
embracing the world on this brand new day.

It's time's like this we sigh with relief
sheer joy, of being alive seeing,
sharing, the delights this world has to offer.

Smile She's Here.....
Saturday, August 6, 2016
Topic(s) of this poem: nature
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
Oh What a beautiful moring
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Bill Cantrell 06 August 2016

I love nature poems, this is wonderful, sheer joy is indeed the blessing on a new day, really good poem.

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Christopher Tye 09 August 2016

Great poem and wonderful read, good writing always shines though like the sun at it's brightest.

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Tom Billsborough 09 August 2016

A lovely poem with a lovely photo to match. A day full of promise. I'm a natural early riser and I'm at my best then. Tom

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Annette 18 July 2019

Love poem with my name.lol.

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Bri Edwards 06 September 2016

quite upbeat! a nice treat! what is there, for breakfast, to eat? ? ? bri ;)

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Edward Kofi Louis 15 August 2016

She was in all her glory! ! Nice work.

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Dr Antony Theodore 11 August 2016

This is beautiful....... wonderful imagination.... She Comes in the morning..... beautiful being steps forward. seeing nature as a feminine beauty......... thank you for this wonderful poem.

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Kumarmani Mahakul 09 August 2016

Sounds of whispers swooning around imagery to express beauty of nature with amazing expression painted through expression of words. Amazing! ...10

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