Indira Renganathan

So - Poem by Indira Renganathan

Obscene mortals on scene
Adept at betrayal
Offscene goodness off seen
Mortals rest sceptical
Mother queen Earth has been
Her best to be whimsical
Rebirth umpteen on wheeling
Nature 's assaying reviving trial
Unseen Lord off scene
Not yet at self-portrayal

Comments about So by Indira Renganathan

  • Palas Kumar Ray (2/3/2010 9:42:00 AM)

    A lovely optimistic philosophical write amidst darkness. (Report) Reply

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  • (12/20/2009 10:02:00 AM)

    let's wait for the day...but i think this creator is an artist of different sorts! (Report) Reply

  • (12/11/2009 11:16:00 PM)

    Its perfectly fine Ma'am. Thank you for that elaboration. Lovely write. (Report) Reply

  • Indira Renganathan (12/11/2009 10:17:00 PM)

    evil people are adept at betrayal
    Good people seen off and off scene
    Rest of the mortals remain sceptical
    Mother Earth is at her best balancing
    Wheeling rebirths are nature's reviving trial
    The creator is yet to be at self portrayal
    ...this is on the mystery of that o.k Kranti andRanjit
    (Report) Reply

  • (12/11/2009 11:26:00 AM)

    Interesting write. Open line gave it a nice start. Nice diction. But I didn't got your third line. On whole good one. (Report) Reply

  • (12/11/2009 9:44:00 AM)

    I couldn't get your intent as you intended. Can you please explain it to me ma'am? (Report) Reply

  • (12/11/2009 8:10:00 AM)

    Symbolic write...dual meaning any where inside? very intelligently composed...and on the last two lines- i must quote Bhagavat Gita- 'Yadha Yadha Hi Dharmasya' and the rest of that Sloka...10 (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Friday, December 11, 2009

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