So Sublime! Poem by Ernestine Northover

So Sublime!

Rating: 5.0


Photo shoot,
Hey! That’s cute.
Smile please,
say ‘Cheese’!
Click, click.
Super pic.
Camera shy?
not this guy!
Has all the right angles,
Has romantic tangles.
Top model.
What a doddle.
On agents books.
Has the looks.
Icon of style.
Ooohhhhhh! That smile,
Say ‘Cheese’!
again please.
Get me the sal volatile.
I’ve gone weak bodily,
in my knees.
Smile Please!
Just one more time!
He’s so sublime!


© Ernestine Northover

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Lynda Robson 15 May 2008

Loved this fun write Ernestine, it is racy in its composition, well done, Lynda xxx

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Alison Cassidy 10 May 2008

What a racy little number. Love this one. Your chirpy lines flashes like a camera as your Mr. Spunk struts his stuff. Light-hearted and lyrical. Delicious poem. Love, Allie ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥

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Duncan Wyllie 08 May 2008

Ah! ! So you've seen my photo in The 'Oh What A Tangled Web' book hey LOL! ! ! Great poem Ernestine Really innovative Love duncan X

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Thad Wilk 06 May 2008

Hi Ernestine! This poem is fine, so sublime! A picture seen in every line! *10*! ! ! Best wishes, Friend Thad

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Tai Chi Italy 06 May 2008

Love this fun write on the life of the good and the beautiful Ernestine! The way it flows down the page gives it pace and snap too. Perfect shot, smiling at you, Tai

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