So Unfair! Poem by Sandra Feldman

So Unfair!

Rating: 3.5


It's a sad and unfair life
So many times,
Those who deserve to be punished
Survive,
And those who have nothing done,
The Innocent and dearly Beloved,
Are so many times,
So sadly and prematurely, gone

Monday, February 12, 2018
Topic(s) of this poem: uncertainty
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Dr Dillip K Swain 17 February 2018

I absolutely agree with you sentiment expressed through this beautiful little poem, 'Those who deserve to be punished Survive'....Thanks for sharing....10

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 12 February 2018

So true. I do agree entirely with this great piece. You have precisely conveyed the reality.10

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Exactly Sandra life can be really unfair Wonderful writing Thank you for sharing Mario Odekerken

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Laquory Jones 12 February 2018

Very deep write, Thanks for sharing sandra

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The Crow 12 February 2018

Sandra, I was so sad to go. Punished by the site for being so good. Your poem has me crying with Judith who suffered too.

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