+sole Soul+ Poem by Nikunj Sharma

+sole Soul+

Rating: 2.9


I have a soul and I
Know it, my shoe told me
About it; one day while
in transit; from the greener pastures
to an arid one; though other way round
Would have been fun. Sole sole
in my shoe; sole soul in me too.
Can’t be separated from
the self; if separated; won’t be of help
For both the shoe and me; without
Soul is available free. So keep it in;
Deep inside; on its sole you may glide
And take the rough with smooth
in your stride.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Deborah Cromer 24 July 2009

Seems kinda broken up into fragments? I am so used to your work reading straight through and with a smooth flow. It is almost 'choppy'. You have some good, solid thoughts and fun choices of words though! :) Deborah Cromer

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Subroto Chatterjee 24 July 2009

All that soul-searching will wear out your sole....so slow down..! ! Cheeers. Subroto

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Sandhya S N 27 July 2009

Well penned the sole sole in both... a poem with a soul.. regards sandhya

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Theresa Moore 14 August 2009

Witty and true...enjoyable read...thank you

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Andrew mark Wilkinson 05 August 2009

No you'll not go far with out a soul..10

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smooth it is...sole soul...very clever poem..thanks

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Bele Lele 28 July 2009

This is a good one.,

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C. P. Sharma 28 July 2009

It reveals your originality in playing with the words. CP

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