Dr subhendu kar

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! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ***soliloquy Of Sorrow***! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! - Poem by Dr subhendu kar

heart yet knows truth gliding own reason
just as soothing breeze may be from heaven
by the quest of soul yet knowingly unknown
as we remember gleams of grace untold

breath seems to swoon by grace of rose
time is never dispassionate even by falling of snow
night still remembers wine splashing in glass
eyes looks cloudy by pangs of tears heaving shore

passion leaps up to whites of moon shining
lest glow by night may embrace glimpse
hope of tomorrow may hide in dark furrows
yet whisper forsakes grimacing shadow

distance measures depth of silence
as parting slowly peels up skin of gleams
ocean stays away by the ebb in stance
yet soul oscillates as when bereft of glow


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  • Hazel Durham (9/29/2012 6:21:00 AM)


    A heartfelt poem with such depth and vision, great write! (Report) Reply

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  • (7/21/2010 2:27:00 PM)


    i just completely adore the way you slid the words together with honest meaning! (Report) Reply

  • (7/15/2010 3:13:00 PM)


    beautiful poem with powerful expressions and depth of meaning.... (Report) Reply

  • (7/13/2010 10:39:00 AM)


    My Dear Friend~
    My favorite line in this is the 1st in the last paragraph
    Although I found a lot of depth in the poems entirety-
    Best Wishes~
    Peace~
    James
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  • Dr.tony Brahmin (5/8/2010 3:15:00 PM)


    ilike these lines:
    passion leaps up to whites of moon shining
    lest glow by night may embrace glimpse
    hope of tomorrow may hide in dark furrows
    yet whisper forsakes grimacing shadow

    moon, glow, glimpse, tomorrow hiding, whisper, shadow. thank u for this pem. keep sharing please.
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  • Luwi Habte (4/30/2010 6:54:00 AM)


    and i like this stanza..

    breath seems to swoon by grace of rose
    time is never dispassionate even by falling of snow

    i really admire the poem @ all...
    well done Dr
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  • (4/30/2010 1:45:00 AM)


    First stanza first line,
    ‘heart yet knows truth gliding own reason’

    May be truth giving chance to grasp grab more strongly…
    Measuring the yearning of heart
    When yearning is saturated truth will reveal Thyself…
    Thanks for such a deep diction
    Voted 10++
    Ms. Nivedita
    UK
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  • (4/26/2010 10:51:00 AM)


    I like the third stanza:

    Passion leaps up to whites of moon shining
    Lest glow by night may embrace glimpse
    Hope of tomorrow may hide indark furrows
    Yet whisper forsakes grimacing shadow.

    A beautiful piece you've written here. Your words flow perfectly.


    B.B.
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  • Emma Adamyan (4/25/2010 2:12:00 PM)


    breath seems to swoon by grace of rose
    time is never dispassionate even by falling of snow
    night still remembers wine splashing in glass
    eyes looks cloudy by pangs of tears heaving shore

    yes really too poetic and graceful!
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  • (4/25/2010 6:43:00 AM)


    excellent metaphorical poem, very very sad belonging to lyrism...You are an excellent Fochlucan Lyrist, Dr.Kar....thank you for sharing....
    10/10/10
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