Solitude's Sins Poem by Sandra Feldman

Solitude's Sins

Rating: 5.0


Solitude,
Is a black hole
Someplace in the Universe,
A long empty space,
With no columns
Like a tunnel,
Just like Hell
No light, no hands,
No souls, no face
To communicate,
Vacated, silent
The pitch black darkness
Of a Bottomless well
So hold on to your love,
Never to solitude,
The blood
Of an innocent
Loving, Dove
Should not be used
To hide it,
And if love is found
Do not misguide it
Never give in
To solitude's sins.

Monday, April 1, 2019
Topic(s) of this poem: loneliness
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Laurie Van Der Hart 05 April 2019

Very powerful poem. Experience makes poetry richer, unfortunately in this case.

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Sylvia Frances Chan 01 April 2019

Perfectly thought, wisely told, correctly sent back to where it belongs these Solitude´s Sins. Thank you so much for your valuable words, and I shall follow your wise advice, so clearest said, kindest and nice, dear Sandra. A heart wrenching. poem. A 10 and much much more for the voting(s)

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