Some Girl Poem by JOE POEWHIT

Some Girl

Rating: 5.0


Flirting with a style.
Coy, joyous, for awhile.
Then crazy mellow wits.
Crying love songs with fits.
Dream wonders fill clouds.
What color, a confusion loud.
A walk like gilded lace.
Funny insane love race.
Pearl of the oyster shell.
My man, or maybe hell.

5/9/09 POEWHIT

JESUS SAVES

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Dream wonders fill clouds. What color, a confusion loud..... ys real illusion later on but no coming back option.... fine poem sir.....10

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Shashendra Amalshan 06 October 2009

Some girl indeed.. this is good, very fun to read. Hope Jesus will save me! ! ! I feel very bad these days! ! ! ! ! ! this is good 10++ regards Shan

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Kesav Easwaran 15 May 2009

Creative write Joseph...words nicely glide like pearls of the oyster shells at your will there...thanks...10

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