Something 'bout the sun
warming the back of my neck
makes me think of your hand
flexing with no threat,
drawing out my lust
as you gently squeeze.
Something 'bout the sun
kissing the back of my neck
as, eyes closed, I imagine
where your soft bite will sink
as though I'm made of berries
dipped in cream.
Something 'bout the sun
colouring the back of my neck
rosy red upon heated shades
mirrored by my cheeks
as your eyes scream
what your body wants to say.
18/8/08
That why they used to worship the sun, lovely piece 10+ regards Tom
a smart sun that must be...creating love wonders working alone on the back of neck...a write cheerfully romantic... Viola, sunny days again? 10+
there is something in the sun that this concept lovely...makes me feverish... warmly written... Ency Bearis
Arohamai! .. someting? ? ? a 'bout of the sun shades.. has kept me inside.. but it means I get to read this sun burn of sweaty......
The tempreture is rising in ths poem, stay out in the sun and enjoy it more sounds a nice place to be Chris 10 x
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
OH make me behave..., I really like this one my Super V.