Sometimes Good By Is A Second Chance ~ Poem by Thad Wilk

Sometimes Good By Is A Second Chance ~

Rating: 3.5


Please forgive me, for the wrong's i've done
And the pain, I have put you through. Give me
A second chance at our romance. To prove
My love is true. If we could only start again.
This time; the world would be brand new.
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I would be your Adam and you my Eve. We will
Dwell evermore in paradise. These truths you
Must believe. No broken hearts, no sadness
There. Only love will fill the air. In this Garden of
Eden our love will grow and like the rivers,
It will flow.
~
There; time as we know it, would rest it's weary
Wings. No more would it, fly by. Our love will
Stay forever young and twould never die.
~
We would reap so many splendorous things. All
The joy's that true love brings. Oh, if we could
Only start again. In this world brand new. Please
Give me a ''second chance'', my sweet. To prove
My love for you...

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~TJW~

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Fiona Davidson 01 June 2009

What a brilliant write this is Thad...some good byes can be second chancves if handled right...Fi 10+++

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Andrew mark Wilkinson 01 June 2009

Go on forgive him, he is a romantic fool :) Nice one my mate.. Andy 10

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Little Hatila ;) 02 June 2009

wowwwwww...you should have been forgiven by now ;) Hataw

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Andrew Blakemore 02 June 2009

Excellent poem Thad, it could have been written by a grand master such is the power, feeling and emotion in your words. Top marks my friend. Best wishes, Andrew

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BreOnna Schneck 10 February 2010

that is beautiful. I'll be your Adam and you'll be my Eve. Just absolutely wonderful.

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Meggie Gultiano 06 June 2009

asking for forgiveness is a very humbling act.You did it, Friend Thad...and i do miss reading your poems. hugs from here, Meggie

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Duh Huh 06 June 2009

Well, for all its worth, you have my vote too Thad, i hope she gives you a second chance, who can she resist that beautiful plea for love. Thank you for sharing :)

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Tia Maria 02 June 2009

Sweet talk when it's genuine does work - good luck friend Thad :) I sure melted when I read this :)

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Tsira Goge 02 June 2009

Very nice... To poets is a lot of second chance because women's love, majority is going by ears / With a smile.../ 10... Best wishes, Tsira

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