Valerie Dohren

Gold Star - 6,491 Points (13 January 1947 / Southport)

Sometimes When I'M Dreaming - Poem by Valerie Dohren

Sometimes, when I’m dreaming,
I feel you by my side
In the moonlight gleaming,
And when the sun has died.

I can hear you breathing,
Behold your gentle smile.
Know when you are leaving,
Then pray you’ll stay awhile.

For when you are near me
The world’s a sweeter place -
As I love you dearly,
Beyond all time and space.

And when I am dreaming
Your hand entwines with mine -
Ah, when I am dreaming,
The world is so divine.


Comments about Sometimes When I'M Dreaming by Valerie Dohren

  • Weldon Davis (1/18/2016 4:25:00 PM)


    This poem is romantic and eloquent...Loved it :) (Report) Reply

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  • Meena Mustafa (2/26/2014 7:09:00 PM)


    Beautifully expressed! just loved it. Thanks for sharing. (Report) Reply

  • Juan Olivarez (2/25/2014 8:37:00 AM)


    Absolutely beautiful Val. Be well dear. (Report) Reply

  • Thomas Vaughan Jones (2/21/2014 2:46:00 PM)


    Beautifully written Val. Tender emotions presented with your usual perfect syncopation.
    This poem is a rose among thorns, a lonely little petunia in an onion patch.
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  • Tirupathi Chandrupatla (2/20/2014 12:43:00 PM)


    When dreaming, the world is divine. Beautiful poem. (Report) Reply

  • Diane Hine (2/18/2014 9:46:00 PM)


    Graceful as the sweetest dream. (Report) Reply

  • (2/17/2014 6:21:00 PM)


    Truly a gift for us all to read, well done Val. (Report) Reply

  • John Brown (2/17/2014 9:43:00 AM)


    Another beautiful poem Val. I love it. (Report) Reply

  • Paul Reed (2/17/2014 7:07:00 AM)


    In the moonlight gleaming and when the sun has died... simple but great line (Report) Reply

  • (2/17/2014 5:40:00 AM)


    A very beautiful poem, sometimes the dream world can seem like
    the better world.
    (Report) Reply

  • Amitava Sur (2/17/2014 3:28:00 AM)


    A beautiful imagery consoling the soul... so nice so soothing, only love can give.
    You may read my poem I miss that gift.
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  • Anthony Burkett (2/16/2014 2:36:00 PM)


    Beautiful sentiment... lovely in its essence of dream-like softness... wonderfully composed... beautifully penned. (Report) Reply

  • Om Chawla (2/15/2014 9:36:00 AM)


    Straight from the heart;
    'Love beyond all time and space.'
    Very well written, Val.
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Poem Submitted: Saturday, February 15, 2014

Poem Edited: Monday, February 17, 2014


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