Sometimes, when I’m dreaming,
I feel you by my side
In the moonlight gleaming,
And when the sun has died.
I can hear you breathing,
Behold your gentle smile.
Know when you are leaving,
Then pray you’ll stay awhile.
For when you are near me
The world’s a sweeter place -
As I love you dearly,
Beyond all time and space.
And when I am dreaming
Your hand entwines with mine -
Ah, when I am dreaming,
The world is so divine.
Beautiful sentiment... lovely in its essence of dream-like softness... wonderfully composed... beautifully penned.
A beautiful imagery consoling the soul... so nice so soothing, only love can give. You may read my poem I miss that gift.
A very beautiful poem, sometimes the dream world can seem like the better world.
In the moonlight gleaming and when the sun has died... simple but great line
Beautifully written Val. Tender emotions presented with your usual perfect syncopation. This poem is a rose among thorns, a lonely little petunia in an onion patch.
When dreaming, the world is divine. Beautiful poem.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
Straight from the heart; 'Love beyond all time and space.' Very well written, Val.