! Song Of June ! Poem by Rema Prasanaa

! Song Of June !

Rating: 2.4


June sings for me, a song
of a rain cloud, which has
lost its way in a desert storm,
haunted and chased
by the conspiring rays of
of a burnt up sun
but found its way back
to a green hill to sing
again a song for me....



June 11,2009

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Raj Nandy 24 June 2009

Reema, I sincerely like to embrace your song of June, hoping it would bring us some respite from Delhi's heat wave! 10! -Raj Nandy

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Ashraful Musaddeq 11 June 2009

Love this beautiful piece

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Gayatri Nambiar 11 June 2009

How long a sun can conspire and it is sure nature has its own ways to bring back a rain cloud to earth.... 10 ++

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Marieta Maglas 11 June 2009

a beautiful visual, extended metaphor: ''a song of a rain cloud, which has lost its way in a desert storm, haunted and chased by the conspiring rays of of a blazed sun but found its way back to a green hill'' bordered at the ends by the same expression: ''June sings for me'' and ''to sing again a song for me'' wonderful symmetrically poem..10++

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