Priyankita Kar

Rookie - 0 Points (11-04-1992 / Sambalpur, India)

Song Of Success - Poem by Priyankita Kar

every success has a song,
that the winner sings,
it is known to none,
except the brave dead kings.

heart hears it,
sweetest song of all,
sweeter than the Nightingale's,
songs in the Fall.

its never same for any,
we require to build,
which by the losers,
is smothered and killed.

listen, listen the song,
its humming within you,
try to make it louder,
luck favours only few...

Topic(s) of this poem: hardship, inspiration, motivation, song, success, victory

Form: Didactic Poetry


Comments about Song Of Success by Priyankita Kar

  • Vishal Sharma (11/15/2015 2:13:00 PM)


    lovely (Report) Reply

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  • Souren Mondal (10/30/2015 11:10:00 PM)


    A very well written poem about success and hardship...

    Cheers Priyankita and welcome to PH :)
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  • (10/30/2015 11:14:00 AM)


    Its fabulous (Report) Reply

  • Kumarmani Mahakul (10/29/2015 3:21:00 AM)


    please read every instead of evdry. (Report) Reply

  • Kumarmani Mahakul (10/29/2015 3:16:00 AM)


    every success has a song,
    that the winner sings,
    it is known to none,
    except the brave dead kings.- - - -yes, evdry success has a song. So nicely envisioned and beautifully depicted. Many thanks dear Priyankita, keep the ball rolling. - - 10
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  • Fabrizio Frosini (10/28/2015 8:52:00 PM)


    '' a song, / that the winner sings ''

    a 'paean' (Peana, in Italian) , song of triumph.. thank you for sharing, Priyankita
    Cheers
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  • Dr.tony Brahmin (10/28/2015 4:43:00 PM)


    listen, listen the song,
    its humming within you,
    try to make it louder,
    luck favours only few... listen to the song of success which is uniqually your own. very nice poem. like it very much. tony
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  • Kelly Kurt (10/28/2015 1:00:00 PM)


    Wonderful thoughts, Priyankita. Thank you (Report) Reply

  • Rajnish Manga (10/28/2015 12:47:00 PM)


    One needs to work hard and with focus and persistence to hear that music in the heart. It is the celebration of our success. Congratulations on account of this maiden poem on PH. Thanks. Hope there will be many more forthcoming. (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Wednesday, October 28, 2015



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