In the hues of midnight
You glitter as the flickering fireflies glow.
Bees on shy flowers cite-
adore your beauty in theirsongs humming-low,
moonshine and raindrops embellish your skin glow.
Beautiful poem Sir. Loved the lines Bees on shy flowers cite- adore your beauty in theirsongs humming-low, 10 out of 10 for it.
Bees on shy flowers cite- adore your beauty in their songs humming-low, moonshine and raindrops embellish your skin glow. So lovely composition dear poet, wish to read it million times. 10++
Beautiful words for the one you love and paint in such endearing phrases. 10++++++++++++
Thanks dear friend Susan for the beautiful words of encouragement.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
Such a beauty depicted in this tanka.Simply excellent!
Thanks dear Sir for so beautifully written remarks, that made my day.R Regards. Subhas