Sonnet Of Poems-09: The Balls Of Fire Poem by Subhas Chandra Chakra

Subhas Chandra Chakra

Sainkul, Anandapur, Odisha, India

Sonnet Of Poems-09: The Balls Of Fire

Rating: 5.0


In those poems,

My sufferings were like

The balls of fire

In the hands of the innocent insects

Infested with dark desires-


Who never have dreamt,

Nor have flied high

Off their birth place

Since they riveted to their

Winged dreams

In the hour before the dawn

Under a Sun on a chariot

Drawn with the single most horse

Widowed on the day of wedding.

Sonnet Of Poems-09: The Balls Of Fire
Thursday, October 19, 2017
Topic(s) of this poem: anger,creativity,fire,passion,poems,poetic expression
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Seema Sharma Rimi 26 October 2017

Since they riveted to their Winged dreams In the hour before the dawn Lovely, great thinking by the poet. 10++ for it.

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Subhas Chandra Chakra 27 October 2017

Thanks Seema dear for these great remarks.

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Sabita Sahoo 26 November 2017

Winged dreams In the hour before the dawn Lovely, great thinking by the poet. 10++ for it.

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soumya 23 November 2017

Who never have dreamt, Nor have flied high Off their birth place Since they riveted to their Winged dreams Thanks for shared 20+++++

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Sanjukta Sahoo 26 October 2017

ince they riveted to their Winged dreams In the hour before the dawn Under a Sun on a chariot Nice. Great poem,10+++

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Subhas Chandra Chakra 27 October 2017

Thanks dear Sanjukta for the great remarks.

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Seema Sharma Rimi 26 October 2017

Since they riveted to their Winged dreams In the hour before the dawn Under a Sun on a chariot Drawn with the single most horse Widowed on the day of wedding. 10+++ for it.

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Subhas Chandra Chakra 27 October 2017

Thanks Rini for the great remarks.

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Anita Aparajita Das 26 October 2017

My sufferings were like The balls of fire In the hands of the innocent insects Infested with dark desires- lovely menageries, great poem. Thanks for sharing a lovely poem. 10++++

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Subhas Chandra Chakra 27 October 2017

Thanks Neetu for the great remarks.

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Subhas Chandra Chakra

Sainkul, Anandapur, Odisha, India
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