Sorrow; Love lost with sadden words
Lost hope with tears that burst
Twisted happiness, that sometimes hurt
Sorrow; A sentiment that makes one tear
Full of emotional sadness and fear
A sense of loneliness unclear
Sorrow; A curse of burning flames deep within
A pot full of worries that brew underneath your skin
A pinch of remorse lingering in your veins
Sorrow; A confused state of mind
That rattles your brain
Sudden lost of thoughts that drive you insane
A train with carts full of pain
Sorrow; An overwhelming sense of driven shame
While emotional strain weakens
The positive one has gained
Different aspects of pain and sorrow are beautifully defined in the thought provoking poem. Enjoyed reading. Thanks for sharing.9 points.
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Melissa, your choice of words offer a harsh and griping assessment on the concept of sorrow as personified by the overwhelming encounters the subject of the writing has endured. In many ways I can relate, which makes your words all the more poignant. I sincerely hope you are not the subject you have written about. And if you are, I wish I could reach through this monitor and offer you a big hug to comfort you. Thank you for sharing, Melissa! [rating: 10]
R B Seals, your feedback and thoughtful comment is very appreciated. Thank you for your rating.