Sorry I'M Pissed . Poem by Amy Ormonde

Sorry I'M Pissed .

Rating: 5.0


flaming
disengaging
hostile
recreation
pain
what else is there to gain
people being crudely cut
democrats
republics
F*%K them all
their just a part
I cant stand
these half strung a......
really why do they get treatment
when all they do is slure
untrue comments
all they do its and complain
really their all i hate
just sitting there
high an mighty
really all you do
is spite me
the things you need to know
you @*%^&
is there is going to be a fit
of rage and anger
a rising up
a new generation
you dont seem to give a F%^&
but all you do is sit and complain
on your lazy a**es
all day
why should innocent ppl be cut
when your getting raises
and a sh%% load of luck

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
~ Jon London ~ 06 July 2009

The emotion within the lyrics give this piece a face of anger.....nicely expressed write....not too much...just the right amount to say.....back off lol.....keep penning

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this dear. is angered.............the writing itself is so good............ right emotions for you point................. fine job.

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