My Death Poem by Amy Ormonde
My Death
I can watch as this blood trickles slowly
leaving my once pale skin
red and lonely
I can see as my life leads before me
I can feel how my troubles once bore me
I can die in this presence of lonely
feeling once more the satisfaction, if only
I can fall just like the rest once before me
I can be buried 6feet under, adore me
I can watch as you cry to the paster
I can see as the lies growing faster and faster
I can see the fakes that stand before me
weeping thier tears
as if they once adored me
I can see my laughter
because I know
for once in my life
I can finally be alone
without this fakeness
and these fears
I can crumble down to nothing
and wipe away these tears............
it is expressed in sad feelings, hard-times are the worst.. Yet wonderful.
wow... dark, yet wonderfully written... filling with emotions.. I like it...10+++
i love it, its great....... and it is flowing with emotion... keep writing, and ill keep reading....10++
Tres bien! I love this poem by you. Very dark and beautiful and full of emotion and extremely captivating/ 10++ Continue writing, you're wonderful at it.
this my dear poet is a well written poem. you evoked the emotions so well. my heart goes out to you.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
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4/26/2024 10:12:43 AM # 1.0.0.1119
The 'I can''s seem somewhat repetitive, but that is quickly overshadowed by the pure deep originality of the piece, it is beautifully written and dark