Blood Lust Poem by Amy Ormonde
Blood Lust
They say
Death is not what it seems
It does not replace the screams
in your dreams
It does not resolve those problems
that linger along with dread
All these years Ive had
of hate
of rage
of pain
of sorrow
With one swift movement
I could no longer be here for tomorrow
and I laugh at all the saints
because they know of all this hate
if death never solved
the desires we have
or took away our pain
Then why do so many
end thier lives
because of all their hate
Why do people run
and fear it
When death is nothing but a limit
I could, could take my life today
to show these people
How Im made
To prove them wrong
to watch them cry
Blood lust
is not a crime
and as i lay here
dabating my fate
you all laugh
and scream out
'what a fake! '
But wait and see
for I am me
and the things I think
are not what you may seem
so once again
I point and sing
blood lust
is not a crime
Now what do you think!
it is ok...no one will know..do it..you will be doing them a favor.....iip.. i liked it..it is good.. :)
my friend. you are one of the best young poets on here.. this is a very well executed piece. with the right emotions set through the perfect rhythm.
The addition of a 2nd person statement through out and at the end of a poem can do one of two things. It either discredits the professionalism of the writing in question or embellishes the theme, making the reader ponder over the piece afterwards. This is a pice so deep dark and outstandingly written, it takes the reader inclusion segments and makes them think past the poem and focus on the elements portrayed, I absolutely find this poem amazing, Beautifully written and conataing a bittersweet taste of the macabre saturninity
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
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4/25/2024 6:16:42 PM # 1.0.0.1119
I don't really like this poem. But it is well written. Your just sad because there are 5 stages of deppresion. What ever you should not do is to kill yourself that would mean that your deppresion would win. You can not let that happen. You are young like me but I have to say that you dont want to take your life because if you do I would not be able to read your beautiful poems that you make.