Amy Ormonde
<font color= red>Nancy, France
Sunday, June 21, 2009


Rating: 5.0
Im lost
I did something I should have never
Now I sit and wait in sorrow
For a another unopen letter
Why must I be so stupid
Why cant I just let live and be
Why must I torment me?
Where is this rage
going to end
When are these tears
going to begin
I see now what I should Have did
I should have let you
Throw and hit
I should have let you have your fit
I should have let you
Have your way
But in the end
all I must say
Is Im the one that took you in
Im the one that let you sin
Imthe one you Hit and beat
and these tears that flow are coming from me
and as they flow
I will see
You were never ment to be!
Amy Ormonde
Ben Gieske 24 June 2009
Your poetry is very personal and emotional. You are writing from your gut. Rainer Maria Rilke, a famous German poet, told a young poet that, if he wanted to write good poetry, he would have to write what he really felt deep inside of himself. You have made a good beginning doing this. Keep it up!
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Eyan Desir 22 June 2009
Good write.... but read this over there are some errors
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~ Jon London ~ 22 June 2009
I love it when a writer uses pure emotion in creating poetry...this is one of them....wonderful job
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Jacob Andrew Jarman 22 June 2009
this is so powerful dark and hard hitting 10+
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this says so much in a lil
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Kyle Jones 21 June 2009
Short Simple & too the point. personally feel it's open to interpretation and dark to the point of beautiful. It is terse, but in an original and deep way,
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