Tears Poem by Amy Ormonde

Short Simple & too the point. personally feel it's open to interpretation and dark to the point of beautiful. It is terse, but in an original and deep way,

Your poetry is very personal and emotional. You are writing from your gut. Rainer Maria Rilke, a famous German poet, told a young poet that, if he wanted to write good poetry, he would have to write what he really felt deep inside of himself. You have made a good beginning doing this. Keep it up!

Good write.... but read this over there are some errors

I love it when a writer uses pure emotion in creating poetry...this is one of them....wonderful job

this is so powerful dark and hard hitting 10+

this says so much in a lil